I might take this all back soon, but right now, I think I'm climbing out of revision hades. I still have lots of polishing to do, but the second of the New Climax scenes is in a good place. I just reread it and got tears in my eyes. Seth gets it. I've known him for, oh, three years. And this is the first time he's ever truly gotten it.
I couldn't be more proud of us right now. I'd like to thank Tom Petty (for playing on repeat all day) and (for being a sweetheart) for making this possible.